Johanna bolted for the exit, feet tripping one over the other in her haste to be outside in the open air.She stumbled out and crashed against the wall of the excavation pit, gasping and heart pounding. A shadow blotted the sun. Her breath caught in her throat as she looked up.
A dirigible flew over the desert on a faint rumble of a steam engine and a billow of grey smoke, its silver-white sides gleaming. Though she’d seen them before, none had been quite this big... and it was not the only one.
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Very intense and intriguing!
ReplyDeleteWow, awesome description and action.
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
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Oh, yay! Great visuals & tension. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteFantastic action, Misa! I loved this. And you know if I want to read more, it's got to be good!
ReplyDeleteLove the description of the dirigible(s). Ominous! Great six.
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